Back Herring
opinion on lyrics
started a new song today what do you think
pilots license
to a paper plane
out the eye
of the deranged
twister of a windmill
snaps the bearings
light as a feather
on the back of a herring
shot, stabbed, caught, grabbed
ripped the wires in a brain stem
twisted, ripped, torn, burned
run to the fallen
and collect the ashes
life’s a slumber
deaths the awakening
limbo is a daydream
and hells a mosh pit
Very good. Sounds like you worked hard. Your the artist, but from the mood i got throughout read it, ripped the wire in a brain stem doesn’t fit or flow.
love the ending stanza, except the mosh pit thing.
and hell is shakening?
i’m bad at this. obviously your the artist. i appologize for all my criticisms.
Tugalo Blue Back Herring at Night
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